Wednesday, November 27, 2013

Kieran 100WC


"What do you mean Max?" Jessica asked curiously. Suddenly before the kids very eyes the door bashed off its hinges. No one came out but a huge gust of wind. "Run!!" Shouted Max to his sister, a man in a black suit trudged forwards flattening the leaves as he walked closer and closer towards them.

"QUICKLY RUN!!" Shouted Max again. As the children started running the man was walking faster. Max looked behind him
"Hes gone!" Max said as he was starting to get tired.
"HHEELLPP JESSICA" Max shouted as loud as he could.

1 comment:

  1. Oh dear, poor Jessica and Max! You left me wanting to read more! Da iawn Kieran. Miss Williams

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